Hairy Mary

dye job

Hairy Mary

 

When Mary tried to dye her hair bright blue

Same as was done by her friend Mary-Lou

She’d used acid not dye

And her hair went bye-bye

But she’s now savin big bucks on shampoo

Reviews

[DawnMichelle]

I love it, love it, love it!! Made me laugh. Great rhyme scheme.. but i was wondering about your syllable count. What do you think of this.. Mary died her hair bright blue, just like her friend mary lou, she used acid dye.. her hair went bye-bye....now shes savin big bucks on shampoo.. just a thought. Nice work, I hope people will give me honest reviews on mine.

[john l smith]

Thanks Dawn
Yes, I don't pay much attention to syllable count.
Might be it's hazy, cuz I tend to be lazy?
Thanks for suggestion. I'll try to be a better boy.
Dave B

[DawnMichelle]

No doubt in my mind you're a fine boy just the way you are!!

[lightsong]

Hilarious!! and unfortunately so true, if Mary-Lou had a rainbow hair, then Mary MUST have it too and nothing else, sigh!!! what a shallow world the society has became, though Your poem is funny but behind it, a great message hides. thanks to that society for You can have something to write about and make us smile, thank You my friend :)

[john l smith]

you are most welcome and thanks for dropping by
Dave B

[Dr. YumnaKay]

hah this had me smiling! Keeping up with the fashion trends sometimes ends up in disasters lool
Good one, Dave :D

[john l smith]

Thanks Doc
I see that keeping up with your limerick collection will be even more difficult

[Khushi]

Good your Husband will like I will share it with my USPS Postal service liteblue.usps.gov

[john l smith]

good luck.........

[Chris Shaw]

Funny lines Dave. You got me smiling.

Chris

[john l smith]

Hello Chris
Thanks for visit

[Chris Shaw]

You are good at limericks :)

[john l smith]

simple mind for simple rhyme
enjoy your aft/eve

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks. You too. Just about to cook the evening meal.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is too funny....and we have an establishment that is famous in Carbondale..Mary Lou's...a diner with great breakfast...Mary Lou passed years ago, but her legacy lives on...i could just picture her bald after reading this...
j.

[john l smith]

A sorry fate indeed
I wonder if there are statistics on the number of Mary Lou's out thereread moreA sorry fate indeed
I wonder if there are statistics on the number of Mary Lou's out there
Enjoy your day

[Samuel Dickens]

Well, at least she still has her triangular mustache. Or does she? Fads--sheesh!

[john l smith]

All time clazy man
R U any near all the crazy weather
What a mess
Poor people

[Samuel Dickens]

Naw, were're fine here. (So far)

[john l smith]

good to hear

[Wild Rose]

The "No Locks" look

a genuine skinhead

[john l smith]

Yes, it seems to be very common these days so she will probably fit right in
Thanks for visit