Some Fun

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Some fun

 

Having recently been cleaned out of a comb

Hairball hid in a dark corner alone

There he quietly pulled out his i-phone

And gave wind a call, so they could go roam

 

Soon wind came by on the run    

He treated hairball like his own son

But their time together had barely begun

Before vacuum cleaner put an end to their fun

Author's Note

an R&R

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Eureka!

or is it

Hoover?

clever write!

j.

[john l smith]

I think my reply went askew
Just wanted to thank for visit
Dave

[barleygirl]

I prefer your version of the hairball . . . light & fluffy . . . rather than the kind hacked from some cat's gooey throat! As Sam noted, this is the height of originality . . . never has there been a message approaching your level of imagination. And you do this pretty often too. That's the amazing thing. Just looking at this simple little poem does not show the whole breadth of your outlandishness (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[john l smith]

Whether from a cats' throat (yuck) or not, it has to rated as a the planets most maligned version of the ball.
Enjoy your day on your sunny (?) hillside (?)
Dave

[barleygirl]

It's been so gorgeous here in recent weeks, it should be against the law . . . sending some of my overflowing warmth! *smile*

[Samuel Dickens]

Sir, I believe this is the first hair-ball poem I have ever read. It was about time the lowly hair ball received some recognition! Oh, you are clever one. I wonder--does naval fuzz qualify?

[john l smith]

Naval fuzz. How could I overlook such a common clinger
I would say it does, or;
Could there be a 'story' there?
Good morning 2U
PS You got me again; What is a Sir?

[Chris Shaw]

Ha ha. Now you are talking. That's what I call imagination. You know I don't think I'll be able to vacuum again without thinking of this little treasure. Naughty vacuum cleaner.

Chris

[john l smith]

Always lurking around the corner
Good (Daylight savings) morning 2U, which has me way off kilter
Enjoy your day and your vacuum!

[Chris Shaw]

No vacuuming today! I've given myself a day off. Hairballs get everywhere don't they. Shouldn't you be asleep?

[john l smith]

I certainly should be. It doesn't seem to be as easy as it used to be!

[Chris Shaw]

Know what you mean my friend. I'm usually awake half the night as well. Sleep when you can eh?