Blanket

A short poem riddled with metaphors. Or a metaphor. You decide

Covering me for comfort 

Keeping me warm 

Peace found at last 

I search all day 

For what can be found at home 

The real comfort of the blanket

Is in finally finding your soul

Live life and enjoy 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

What I love about your message: (1) uniquely stated about relatable life . . . (2) could refer to god's love, self-love, whatever one's medication from despair . . . (3) as a statement about god's love, I prefer seeing this presented as a comfy blanket (like you did) rather than as something lofty & looking down upon us. I've always felt about god as one feels about an everyday best friend, which is the vibe I get from your poem (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Kerra]

Wow, this is really wonderful, I enjoyed this write a lot

[julius_wyann]

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. This is definitely some of my best work to date

[John the Baptist]

I translate this one as a metaphor for a Higher Power. It is what we really seek, but ironically, we do so in all the wrong places. For it was within us from the start.

[julius_wyann]

Great review! Pretty much what I was going for but you put into different words beautifully. Thank you