Mind

Your thoughts flow like water in a creek, the pebbles of ambivalence that break the surface disrupt the perpetual flow of mental tranquility but with time the pebbles will smooth over and the natural rhythm will return once more.

Reviews

[jesserose99]

love the analogy here, they must be so, meddlesome pebbles, popping up, causing mixed feelings when all you want is peace. How many of us have been there...well all of us to tell you true, yet clarity always returns, something a rock most likely shows up in the water, distracts us from our ambivalence and we suddenly make a choice we didn't realize we had already made.

A lovely flowing thought, that just was one cohesive....creek.

[Dajena]

A one breath poetic prose, with hope at the end of it.