It's about the little things

It's about the little things

A Story by joe

Why do you look down when I walk next to you... 

I stare at you, but you don’t notice me smile when you pass me by

This moment has got to be what makes it for me today

Girl you can tell me why, whatever is on your mind

Don’t let me down, as long as I am here. 


This is like that moment when you see a beautiful girl through the corner of your eye and are too afraid to look at..

So instead you keep her in your peripheral and imagine what that haze of an image is... 

Only when she gets up you manage to stare and only when she’s looking down you manage to look up

You stare at the lights like your interest is peaking, but don’t walk up and get the attention your seeking...

Sitting in a cafe, dressed in your everyday weather beaten clothes 

Unprepared for the actions you wish you could make 

It's early but you've been in for too long... perpetual confinement

I don’t want to see you as a stranger, 

Don’t be that somebody I used to know,

We can make our dreams reality

So can we forget what everyone is thinking and let go of our insecurities to stare into each other,

Enjoy that one brief moment where no one, 

but us exist’s.

I'm into your polka dotted dress, 

Vibing off the bounce of your steps, 

Hair flowing seamlessly in the air,

I can't help but feel your ambience,

I am digging your dimensions.


It's about the little things with her..

She gives off an aroma when I think of her; of red wine. 

Whenever I see her, I can imagine the way she walks, 

With a presence as if making an entrance every time.

The words to describe her are only words of romance, smooth to the tongue, easy on the lips, and soft to the ears.


So why do you look down when I walk next to you?

I gaze in you direction, you stare at me, but you don't notice me smile when I am passing you by. We pass each other, but now you silently.. hollar, turning back, red to the face;

But, I am too caught up in your thoughts to look back

So I keep moving forward...Honest I do

© 2014 joe


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absolutely love the honesty of this piece..p.s it needs a sell check and a little reorganisation, but it is so on the right track..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

joe

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I will work on it. I greatly appreciate your critique.

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