can't you see?

have you ever seen me cry?

have you ever heard me quit?

and then you say your life is sad.

you say you were embarrassed

but I've been through it worse

you say you got teased

but isn't that what you do with me?

you say that you have problems

but baby cant ever you see...?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

People see what they need. I like the questions asked in the poetry. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[yashmita13]

thank you..

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[mattavelli]

Thanks for sharing. I see someone isn't living up to your standards. I had to read it twice to find the tone, because the third line threw me; but I get it now.

[Matthew James Ginn]

a simple but profound poem of the unfair stages of life. We live in a sad quest of solitude. No one knows the truth of our center.

[yashmita13]

awhh thanks

[Matthew James Ginn]

besides my unnecessary need for symbolism. Your just a great writer.