Excersize

I drank from the cup which sat on the shelf that had been built by Ted whom Fred brought round.

 

 

 

I glanced at the chair which stood on the floor that had been mopped by Lilly whom Ted hired after Fred brought him round.

 

I watered the plant which hissed at my feet that had been brought by Jane whom knew Lilly that Ted hired after Fred brought him round.

 

I called Jane whom Lilly knew and said thankyou for the plant that hissed at my feet which stood on the floor that Lily whom Ted hired had mopped after Fred brought him round.
 

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

That a unique writting, I love the form , I think you did a Good job :-) Yossi

[fireblossom]

Attention holding storyline winding through a short form poem.

I liked it then (while reading it) and still like it now.

[WordMaster]

Absolutely, positively, delightful