Dark Tales

Dark Tales

A Poem by Moonflower

Darkness falls as I take
one final glance at your
unblemished face.
Wiping a tear
from your fading emerald eyes,
as you bestow
your last ailing breath
upon my neck.
I scorn at the jagged
wounds strewn across your chest.
The sweet smell of
your sweat turns the bile
in my stomach.
Beaten in your desire
for bliss, ecstacy, pride,
gratitude... love,
The gradient is steep.
It's a long way to fall,
when your wings have
been burned,shamefull bliss,
exasperated love.

 

© 2008 Moonflower


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That beautiful , you wriote with so much gentel and pain, I can feel your tears rolling your face while written on your lover, thank you for sharing that tender poem :-) Yossi

Posted 15 Years Ago


i love this! it is so dark and sad!! good job!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on June 15, 2008

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Moonflower
Moonflower

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