She felt

A 3.45 am can't. Sleep poem

She felt
The rain
The sun
The moon
She felt

She looked at stars
Felt their shine
Their glow
Beamed down
To her
Glowering
Lifted her
To feel
To feel
She felt
She knelt and prayed
At one
With universe

She felt alone
She was alone
But she felt
not alone as before

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

Generally when one contemplates the vastness of the universe, there is a tendency to feel inadequate, small, inconsequential. For your character to find solace and peace in that same vastness is a wonderful and unique perspective. Well done.

[lightsong]

Soft, so tender, like a smoothing whisper to fill the heart with gentle ease, very beautiful my friend, I could feel the peace flowing through You while writing down Your words.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Light thankyou so much for your endearing beautiful reply and review

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful, honest and good words shared dear Julie. When we are with Nature. We are not alone. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

coyote thanks so much,
that is beautiful of you to say

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

ThAnkyou scarlet for your review I wrote in wee hours

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Lol Annette no wasn't typo but I'll leave as glowering if that's ok or do u think glowing thanks so much

[Cas]

"she felt alone, she was alone, but she felt no alone as before" was a splendid way to end the poem. where some may find nothing empty darkness in the stars, you brought company and faith to everyone with finding some of yourself in the stars. brilliant !!

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

scarlet thankyou so much for taking the time to read my so very amaeteurish stuff lol

[Cas]

it's not amateurish, i promise lol

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Beautiful Julie! Wish I had written it! When we look at the stars, we know we're not alone. One suggestion- glowing instead of glowering. Probably a typo-happens to me all the time! Kudos & God bless!

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Annette thankyou so much for coming back and reading my poems.