Tick tock

Time death last breath

Tick tick
Tock tick tick
It's time to
Stop the clock
Time to
Stop the tocks
Stop telling time

Make the last minutes
Forever Rhyme in time
Her.breath
It ticked
It tocked
It's time now stopped
For evermore

The tick
Ran after tock
No more
Cos tock
'Twas hers no more
It's time stopped
The ticks the
Tocks
Had stopped

Her breath
Her ticks
Her tocks
I shan't forget them not
They tick no more
Forevermore

Julie McCarthy 26 aug 2017

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Thanks Jacob loved your review

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really miss a couple of my friends so much...their clocks quit ticking, but with each tick of my clock...i still feel them in my life...

time doesn't forget, neither do i....

j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

thanks Jacob just on my 2017 year of printing out
just saw this
its taken a few days to print out from 2021 to now lol
I never saved any of my poems so need to print out in case site goes lol
thanks again

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I think this is for mum xx