Coloured pencil

Coloured pencil

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
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On loners lonely exclusion

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It lay there
All alone
The pencil case
Forgot it's own
The pencil cried
Hey let me in
The case
Drew breath and
zippered
In

Julie McCarthy 25 aug 2017

© 2017 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


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You create visions and thoughts with your words. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to strong ending. Thank you Julie for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

7 Years Ago

ThAnkyou coyote
For your kind review
On loners
Exclusion
Etc etc

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on August 26, 2017
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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..

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