Vegetable soup

Vegetable soup

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
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Just made it for Sunday dinner Actual pic my soup

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Hey everyone
How's it goin
Loved my dear mum x
She made this so many
Sunday nights

Add one celery stalk
That won't make you balk
Add two fat carrots
Your eyes will find that hidden claret
Add some onions and thyme and parsley for taste
And dont forget to clean up waste
Add the stock that delicious liquid
It helps to drink this warm to tepid
Add the parsnip and the turnip
They hard to peel
But hey you did it
Add some spinach and broccoli
You'll be dancing at the Tivoli
Add the salt and pepper and
Some noodles for some bulk
And there you have it
My vitamins for my tummy
Nothing here for dog
I forgot to say
I added a choppy mushroom
For my extra protein day

© 2017 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


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Not a fan of vegetable soup but I think I would enjoy this one.thanks for making me smile.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

7 Years Ago

Yes it was the real pic of the soup I made Sunday in my wok thanks for review
Fascinating soup, with some of my favorites. Your rhyme scheme needs a little adjusting, with maybe just a little more flavorful content!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Stupid nonsense
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Posted 7 Years Ago



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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..

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