Strings broken

Again writing as I go

The strum has gone
The string now broken
For years we played
The same old tunes
The rules were never broken
The rhythm always the same
The memories we made like music
like we could never be broken
Like we were dancing in the abbey
It's time to put the guitar down
Sell it
Hang up in the attic
Or restring it yet again
And
together we just may make it
Work

But it's too late you said
The string has strummed
It's day is done
Let's throw out this old relic

Reviews

[Damien Ridge]

Loved the strings/guitar concept. "It's time to put the guitar down, Sell it, Hang up in the attic, Or restring it yet again, And together we just may make it
work" I feel selling it relates to blowing up and being terrible exs, telling nasty stories, spreading rumors. Hang up is just to let it all go and end it peacefully. And restring is to reignite the flame kinda deal. You were able to bring meaning to it all and that's really impressive! Thanks for sharing!

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Correction you brought meaning to it I was just writing about s break up good work

[Damien Ridge]

Well good job regardless!

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Yes the story of my life lol

[wordman]

i guess we just grow a part sometimes,we desire new things and people in our lives

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks for your insight and kind review

[wordman]

you`re welcome,even though you deleted me from your friends list

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

What when where I just read this really I’ll check now

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

No you are on my friends list !

[wordman]

i know ,i was messing with you

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Why would you

[wordman]

i`m still a kid at heart,lol

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Ok 👌
Well ok

[wordman]

i will make a public apology if you like

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Can u stop plz

[wordman]

yes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[ellie]

this is one of the first poems ive read on here and i have to say its extrmely enjoyable.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks Ellie
It's about breaking up and changing status from partner to friend