Roads in life

Roads in life

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
"

He never left me was always with me it was me who turned my head away

"
The Crimson path
The only way
To Paradise Way
Speckled with rocks and
Stones along life's way
Which leads to SAlvation Bay


It's roads are steep
It's oceans drowning deep
The roar of Lions
Drone out all sound
The graceful deer
Who quickly try and disappear
The mountains high
THat reach GOd's. skies
The skies so clear
The bluffs so sheer
The sun the moon the rain
The wind
It's all a road in life
We all of us each must take
A world like this we must rejoice rejoice !!
The sad the happy and the lonely or the
Ones just bored
Which one are you ?
I ask that too

The crimson path
Of which we have read
There is only one way
To Paradise Way
At such HIs cost

So climb those bluffs
And swim the ocean
Duck at life's rocks
And kick the stones afar
Rejoice in the moon
Run in the rain
Look up to the stars
And blow where the wind it may
And pray you live but another day
But don't forget to walk
The crimson way
That crimson path
Down near Salvation Way
The road to paradise found
At PAradise WAy
At such was His greatest cost
On his lonely cross
Beside the sinners
He forgave that day
To make salvation come
To earth
That Crimson SAlvation Way
On just an age old DAy
A paradise I thought I'd lost
I found it again
down at Paradise WAy
Just by SAlvation Bay
On that rejoiceful day
All I had to do was pray







© 2017 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


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Powerful and wonderful words and thoughts.
"On his lonely cross
Beside the sinners
He forgave that day
To make salvation come
To earth "
The above lines. Needed words to be understood by all. Thank you Julie for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

7 Years Ago

Thanks coyote for your heartfelt words means a great deal xx
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Julie.



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Powerful and wonderful words and thoughts.
"On his lonely cross
Beside the sinners
He forgave that day
To make salvation come
To earth "
The above lines. Needed words to be understood by all. Thank you Julie for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

7 Years Ago

Thanks coyote for your heartfelt words means a great deal xx
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Julie.
Two nights ago asked and took Jesus back after many years He replied He had never left me oh GRacious God

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Posted 7 Years Ago


The pic is in a bushwalk I took to beach on weekend

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Posted 7 Years Ago


This poem I'm writing on train home only this journey unlike trip up I don't feel alone or sad

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Posted 7 Years Ago



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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..

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