hope

there is hope in every day every breath TRY TO LISTEN TO BEETHOVEN MOONLIGHT SONATA WHILST READING THIS. ITS ON U TUBE.

i used to dream

i used to hope

then i realised 

just yesterday

that its up to me

not for others to hear my pleas

i need to see that my life is mine

no other one can send a salvage line

i need to believe that im ok

i need to see that i wont decay

i need to start loving who ? yes me!

i know its hard

it know its tuff

but in the end we turn to dust

lets start today

lets start anew

for tomorrow is so new

This gravy train

that takes us there

it takes us to the great out there

i look back at life ive wasted

and realise that is such a sin

so ill start today

ill be a better  person

thats impmossible you say my son

yes ill try to be a 

What u say ? Yes a Person who cares

Author's Note

Not quite finished

Reviews

[Prashant Bajpai]

this is really too gud but few word were not clear it may be my mistake but it was fab as it started

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Sorry can u explain

[Prashant Bajpai]

see i wanted to make the sense by saying that some words were not clear as salvage , anew so they disturbed the meaning of the lines as the meaning was not clear to me

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Oh yes I understand now
Thanks

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I feel I've wasted a lot of my life

[Prashant Bajpai]

life is never to late to start is just that how you seee

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks for your review

[Prashant Bajpai]

always welcome and short help required i just started writting so please help me with your reviews and corrections

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Hi thanks for your kind reviews