Red rose I picked for thee

Romantic Part one of Rose poems

Oh sweet rose
Red rose for you
My love so sweet
With your hair
Dancing almost to your feet

Red rose so wild so fitting
So to speak

Red rose it lays upon your bed
Waiting for you to smell it there
I picked that rose only seconds ago
And in sun and shadows and mossy dew
It did grow my love for you
My one so true

The morning dew lays still on its soft petals now
So my sweet hurry pick it up ever so
Quickly now
I want you to smell it's scent so sweet
As it lays down to your soft heartbeat

Come to me now oh my Princess with name of sweet Rose now
Let me show thee my love and honour now
I'll love you to the day I die
And when we die when so old and grey
We will lay down as lovers true
Just where the roses grew this day
For me to give sweet red roses to only thee

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique: (I want you to smell it's scent so sweet) its - the contraction "it's" should be a possessive pronoun instead

Review: Nice sentiment and just enough emotional content to warm the heart and I would swear I can small the roses :~) Bravo! I give it five out of five Clap! Cap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks for your comments I appreciate your honesty

[Chris]

A soft and mellow toned whisper to the night sky...

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks chris the two Rose poems linked

[Chris]

I saw that...

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks for your kindest reviews