Fairie glow

Whimsical

I felt the breeze
The chiffon weaved around my knees
The sky was bright with
Fairie glows
Upon that roof I stood with all my might
I knew it was a special night
I wanted to dance and sing on that tin roof up top
But dogs may bark beneath and stir the yards amuck
So I just stood and stared and cried
With tears of joy I wiped my eye
For I had lived another day
And more to come
As I blew a kiss beyond

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

Here you go...

I caught a kiss from beyond
Carried on a breeze
Woven brightly with
Fairie glows
So I saw with all my sight
Trapped up top and all afright
By muddy barking guards that left the fairie stuck
So I flew and found and tried
To ease her fears and with me fly
Into a future living way
Hoping it's not done
Blowing feelings written fond

Billigami

[William Michael Reeves]

A fairie in distress! Oh no! I might just have to try and save her.....

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Fairie glow'
(juliespenhere)
You have gathered the whimsical hope and joy within this one.
This reminds of special occasion caught;
"Upon that roof I stood with all my might
I knew it was a special night'
Thankfulness for life lived one more day:
'So I just stood and stared and cried
with tears of joy I wiped my eye
for I had lived another day'
Beautiful hope filled writing.
Blessings
Kathy

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

thanks so much xx