Do you see me?

I'm beside you,
Do you see me?
I'm speaking to you,
Do you hear me?
I'm holding you,
Do you feel me?
I'm kissing you,
Do you taste me?
I'm touching you,
Do you smell me?
I'm beside you,
Do you see her?

Reviews

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

A well put together work. Very nice finish.

[kayleighrenee]

Your poems remind me of my last bad break up, I feel like I can relate to them.

[Caradactyl]

Unfortunately this happens a lot. To both sides. Really good, keep going!

[fireblossom]

Sad and often true. Well put.