Lost and Forgotten

Sad attempt at Haiku. Not sure if it even works out to be one.. I tried.

Please forgive my heart
I am trying so damn hard
Lost and forgotten

Author's Note

First haiku... not sure if it counts as one. That's what reviews are for :)

Reviews

[Chris38]

I tend to agree with Ashley but I don't really worry about things like that. THought it was a great poem though, whatever style it is in.

[Ashley Myers]

From what I've learned for Ostensibletruth: This is a senryu lol. Muh like a haiku, but apparently haikus are about nature. A little piece of knowledge I was taught by O.T. lol. but its the same format as a haiku. Same oncept really just ones about nature and the others not. Thank you O.T.!! I taught someone what a senryu was lol!!!