It hurts today.

Simple. I can still go back to how I felt when I wrote this.

The hole in my chest hurts today.
I wish that you knew how you made me feel.
Maybe it's my self esteem, maybe it's reality.
I knew you were too good to be true.

Reviews

[OnlycallmeKathryn]

I loved this. SO simple yet has so much feeling.

[Chris38]

Brilliant. Four lines are all that's needed here and any more would be superflous. You got your thoughts across perfectly.

[Black Cat Fever]

The heartache and pain come through so profoundly. Very sad. I know the feeling of having that hole in one's heart.

[Ashley Myers]

wow! a statement summed up in four lines that says way more than that. and i know the feeling all too well. i dont normally care much for little four liners or even haikus but this one is excpetional!