one love

one touch, one glance
one kiss, one chance
red flower, white dove
two hearts, one love

Reviews

[Ashley Myers]

ok. youre officially one of my favs on here. love your work

[Elzereth]

As I continue to read your work, you never cease to amaze me with how much emotion you can put into so few words.

[Lily1111]

There is great beauty in simplicity and it is reflected in this well thought out poem. It is as if you weeded the garden and only left the most beautiful flowers in the form of words. This takes a talent too often not acknowledged. Nicely done!

[Wildecat]

Short Sweet and to the point, very nicely done.

[sarahkatherine]

This is really good, simple; yet powerful.

[BEEGE]

I liked reading this one.
Expressing so much with
so few lines is a gift that
you have obviously acquired.
Good one.

Beege