not actually

Liar you lie there 
like a prey hunting spider 
waiting for flies
or half blind admirers 
in your web made of falsehoods
your hearts hard like fossils 
I thought it would be good 
until i laid down horizontal
but you're only partially harmful 
cause i too get rather hostile
once i gargle what you marvel in
& swallow all your awful

Reviews

[Rahul]

Your rhyme's pretty good. Even in your muse there's a shade of prime-rhyme. Very nice. Liked reading it. Short. Simple & Effective poetry you've pen'd on!

[Sam]

your details make a good flow to your piece of writing

[Katlyn Ribine]

The poem is very detailed