To lose you

 

Without a heart

                         without a soul

             I lay here in a emty shell

I can feel my breathe slow

                        as I drift away to never love again.

                           The pain that I have

                 that I lost you and that I cant have you

                   and that I will never feel you again,

                 when you left this world 

                      I died inside.

                           How can I love someone else

       when I only want you,

        I cant feel you I cant see you

            what should I do

        should I freget you

                                     or should I die for you.

         You question my love

                   as if its a game

             how could I lie

      and what sick game would I play,

        I love you forever even to the end

                     am I lieing to myself

                        is these feeling that I feel for you fake

                                 or is it that I realy love you.

            This world is nothing without you

         my life is meaningless

                                        and it sucks without you,

                              I hate my life and your the only thing that made it better

          but now your gone so life is nothing

       wont you save me wont you come for me.

                         Do you watch over me

                     do you still love me

                    can you feel me,

                              I live this life as a lie

                              when your the only truth

                                   im alone and to never love again

                        and I would do that just for you.

Reviews

[Starting Over]

nice

[Bryan A.]

Um, I might be reading too much into this, but is there something wrong? If there is, please tell me so I can find a way to help. This is good. Sad but good, and touching, but it kinda makes me worry a bit.