Me no you no us

Me no you no us

A Poem by playful>Julie xD

You look into my eyes

As you try to find the me inside

As you search you look so lost

But then you smlie cause you found me.

 

I smell the rain

But who knows why

Is it you or

Is it because its raining.

 

What am I thinking

Can't you read me

Am I the only one who knows

Tell me if you know.

 

The sparkle in your eyes

As if you found something of value

What is that look you have for me

Do you realy need, want & love me.

 

Me no you no us

As one & forever.

© 2009 playful>Julie xD


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playful>Julie xD
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It's slightly confusing, but maybe it's supposed to be. I really like it, it's very well-written, and to me, it was easy to get caught up in the words. You have serious talent, I've said it before, and it's still true. This was amazing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


WHAT THE F**K IS GOING ON!!!! I like it though

Posted 15 Years Ago



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playful>Julie xD

newark, CA



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my name is Julie Ann Tutorow and some people call me Julia, so whtev u want to call me is fine. im 15 my b-day is november 6 1993 i love tp draw and write i live in c.a. newark.. more..

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