A never ending light.

       A never ending light

   is when its bright

   shines through the night

   and never dies out.

 

   This light is ture

   Its heavenly peace

   its lovenly though

   as it warms you.

 

   Thy sun is bright

   and thats the light

   which shines so bright

   and never dies.

 

    And if that light shall die

    the world will end

    and this life we know

    will end and we all die too.

 

    Its no fair for some

    as some want to die

    and as some want to live

    as I do not care.

 

    So go ahead lord

    take are light away

    and we shall die

    thats are never ending light.

Author's Note

Tell me what u think.

Reviews

[DMC_Jakob]

Very very nice, shorty. You're an amazing writer. And it really does make you think. I'm making it a personal goal to one day read all of your posted work.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

that is a super ending to this neverending light,
and you're right if he does take it away we'll be in the dark for awhile
then we die. Thanks for sharing this.. I like this type of poetry.. makes you consider
what's really out here for all of us. well besides death.

[Vansgirlrocks]

wow its a great poem
quick question
what do you mean
by the light?
you don't mean death do
you?

[Starting Over]

That was awesome!!! It was sweet and just real neat