wishing star

 

Wishing on a wishing star.Not everyone gets a wish, so use your wish wizely.Im not talken bout a genne, Im talken bout a star.If u asked me on what I would wish for, well read this story and find out.

 

     A  wishing  star.

 

I lie in my bed and gaze outside my window. ( ya Im not much for the fairy tale beging.)As I stare outside my window I see the moon and bunches of stars. After a while I fall asleep.( Did you realy think I was gonna get my wish in the beging.)In the morning I got ready to go see my mom, whos in the hospitel. shes not doing so well, shes very sick.When I get to the hospitel I went to see my mom but shes slowly sliping away. The doctors say shes not going to get better. So I spend the whole day with her.

 

So I go home and my dad makes dinner and we eat it in silence. When I was done I went to got ready for bed. As usually I gaze outside my window, but something was different. Outside my window was a falling star. So I jump out of bed and wish that my mom would get better. Then I went to bed.

 

In the morning I got ready and went to the hospitel with my dad. The doctors was amazed. My mom wasnt dead or sick anymore. So my wish worked. I could have asked for anything but instead I wished for my mother to get better and she did. We lived happyly ever after.

      The End.  ( ya its a fairy tale ending, so what.)

 

My mom isnt sick besides the smoking which I hate; But I do have family that is sick. So I would wish then better.

Author's Note

read the story and tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Starting Over]

Its proves that wishing does help! That every little moment and pray/wish helps!