river moon

stars  above  in  the  great  blue  sky

the  moonlight  that  dances  on  the  riverbed

cold  and  quiet, dark  and  alone

by  its  self,  no  other  kind

the  moons  alone  in  the  great  blue  sky

 

oh  river  moon  how  you  sing  to  me

you  make  the  river  sparkle  tonight

you  dance  on  the  river  so  elegant

as  you  shine  so  bright  that  you  bring  all  the  light

 

as  i  look  up  in  the  sky

i  see  you  and  your  only  friends,  the  stars

the  stars  and  you  in  the  great  blue  sky

 

Reviews

[Starting Over]

I agree with Bryan! Great job Julie!!

[Bryan A.]

This is deep. Love the imagery, very catching. You have serious talent in poetry.

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Julie,

This is a wonderful piece, quiet and calming. Lovely imagery too.

Great write.

All the best,

Rick

[Paul Pruett]

Wow, that is a great piece! Wonderfully written. Some very complex and startling imagery. Good Job, Julie