First Day

Stephs' POV

"Beep!Beep!" went my alarm. "Urghhh" I moaned. School. Why do we have to have school?? It's just gonna be the same thing happening again and again for 5 days! I can't wait till i get out of here. I finally woke up and got dressed (and by dressed, i mean found something under my blankets.), brushed my teeth (in like,10 seconds) and did my hair ( pulled my greasy brunette hair with my brush a few times). I found my bag, slung it over my bag and went downstairs into the kitchen.

There in the kitchen was my older sister, Rachel, gobbling down orange juice.

" What are you wearing?" she asked me.

"Um... clothes??" i replied.

"When was the last time you washed that?" she asked sniffing on my shirt, grossed out.

" Ha ha. Very funny " i said sarcastically.

" No wonder no one notices you" she remarked.

You see, Rachel has everything that a girl could want. Always dressing up in clothes that showed off her curves. I had them too but i chose not to brag. As always, she wore a mini miniskirt and a boobtube.

"Where's mum and dad?" i asked her, trying to make conversation.

"Court with the Sparrows. As usual" she said, rolling her eyes.

" Predictable"  i said under my breath.

I quickly looked at the clock that read 6:50am.

" Ooh! Gotta go. See ya" i said.

" Bye!" she replied.

Now where did i leave my shoes??

 

Chris POV

"WAKE UP!!!" yelled my brother, Jack, jumping on my bed.

" Go away!"  i ordered, tired.

"Ok Ok. But you're already late" Jack pointed out.

"SHI....VERS" I exclaimed. Good save. After all, Jack is only 7.

I grabbed everything in sight. My bag (that had been grafittied all over), my Raben shoes, my clothes and hastily got ready.

"Where's mum and dad?" I asked

"Court with the Smith." replied Jack. I rolled my eyes at that. I left the house by 7:00am...

Reviews

[TheMizFit]

It's short. I like how Stephanie's not like all girl who would take an hour or more for her looks. Since you said ignore grammar, I wouldn't go on about that. This chapter's good although it could use some more descriptions. :)

[M Garcia]

Short, but good. Again I would stretch it out a bit. Add some descriptions of the people, the rooms that each part of the story takes place.

[Klpindc12]

I liked it :)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Great start :)
Flowed very well..

[Martina]

I don't like it, and how can you gobble orange juice? you can only gobble food DUH you think my stuff is bad

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Off to a great start.

[Ange Pange]

awesome! a little short bt still good