bones

bones

A Poem by Julian

No green leaves, only dry, grey brush
 Crackling fingers make supplication to a pitiless winter sky
 in vain.
 
In the vacant lot stretched out to the right
 the few rays of sunlight strike the whiteness of the bones
 once more.
 
Passing by, the people slow their pace-
some say the fragments are so large they must be
 from a small cow or a large goat.
But no one wants to say it, no one wants to hear
 
 those pieces are just the right size for a small
woman
 Or a big
child.
 
And one by one they go their way,
just as they did yesterday
and all the yesterdays gone by
 so long. So long.
 
They turn away and push their over filled high end department store
 shopping carts again,
looking straight ahead because the day is fading
not looking around because the time is short. And their favorite TV shows will
be on soon. They stare ahead,
Rolling and strolling down the sidewalk and out of sight.
 
Perhaps the bones will be gone tomorrow

© 2023 Julian


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This reaches me on another level. I see this scenario on a daily basis, watching the vulnerable decay and crumble to bone while society walks on by, too busy and wrapped up in their own world to care, to stop and hold a hand whilst it still has the flesh, mind and heart attached to it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Julian

1 Year Ago

Perfect- thank you for the depth and breadth of your kind reply,



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Apathy is so scary. The passers by, too preoccupied with trivia to engage with anything of depth and meaning. I found this poem poignant. Touched a nerve on life today.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Julian

1 Year Ago

thank you so much- I was actually driven to write this while reeling from a video I had seen- a man .. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Reminds me of the good Samaritan. Pleased to hear he recovered, but I understand fully your horror.
This reaches me on another level. I see this scenario on a daily basis, watching the vulnerable decay and crumble to bone while society walks on by, too busy and wrapped up in their own world to care, to stop and hold a hand whilst it still has the flesh, mind and heart attached to it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Julian

1 Year Ago

Perfect- thank you for the depth and breadth of your kind reply,
Poetically sad. Apathetically demented.

Great read

With love,

Matthew

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just one short work, but bears so many meanings.
It hinted us to the horrors of natural scenery being so stoic to one's individual demise, the eventual and natural decay of all living beings, the scurrying nature of societal apathy and the circumstances that lead to it.
I personally find the apathetic nature of men to be scarier than the eventual submission to nature even if forcibly.
That being said, it's a great work and worth being re-read on another day.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Old. Will be here sporadically, as time allows. Late wife and I did animal rescue for decades. Now I exist solely to care for my remaining dogs and cats. Scars may tell a story, but are not always.. more..

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