Un, Deux, Trois

If I sipped from your straw 

Would it count as kissing you?

And if I wore your shirt

Could it count as an embrace?

Could I hold your hand and trace your veins

And count it as a win?

Would you let me stay the night in your bed

And count it as a sin?

Kiss me kindly

Treat me soft

Let me sip from your straw

Count me in or count you out, but

If I sipped from your straw and kissed your lips

Could it all count for something?

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is one of my favorites i have read in quite awhile...
love that idea...of both the straw and the shirt...anything to feel close to you...

in a quirky way, quite a romantic piece.

j.

[Julia Ledo]

Thanks. Im so glad you liked it

[Stan]

Julia, I love this writing...it's real sensual, warm and meaningful... good job!

[Julia Ledo]

thank you so much