Falling In Love

Falling In Love

A Poem by j.m

As i look at him my heart aches

i start to break.


i want to forget,

but he’s as beautiful as the color violet


As i talk my words stumble

i start to crumble


i try to talk

but it sounds like a squawk


he’s my dove

i think i’d call it love 

© 2015 j.m


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I enjoyed the poem thoroughly. Just a friendly suggestion: try writing a blank verse (no rhyme scheme)
Thanks for sharing
Maumil

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 17, 2015
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