freefalling

waking up in a blur

thinking, not thinking

sitting, staring

hoping for more

coming, going

not rich, not poor

nothing is certain now

it's never been

not sinking, not swimming

not salvation or sin

waking up in a blur

freefalling

in a world that's not sure

Reviews

[David Scott]

The free fall is interesting...
Actually, like skydiving, it can be a rush at times. Yet when it goes on and on there is a madness to it all. Oh the dread when we hit the ground... Or maybe, just maybe we will find our wings!
I pray you find your wings.
Good work.