green

I watch you move like the sea. 

each hand rolling over me.

i guess ill move away and ill never see you again.

 oh only if time could heal this pain.

i have this ache in my heart and in my hands .

i dream of him tonight.

Reviews

[Anti Phalanx]

I love the imagery with your opening lines. It really get you straight into your writing then BAM! We're opened up to see & feel your pain from what you're going though. Really effective, keep it up!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love the two opening lines… very hot… walking away from someone you love is one of the hardest things to do.