you have the nasty place in my heart

this is for the one person i ever was in a relationship wit and after that i dont want another person like this

breath me in and blow me out 

just like that cigarette pressed against your mouth 

pull me close and then let me go let me hit the ground 

give me love give me drugs 

 something to take away the pain 

fill me up then pour me out never have been kissed once

use me up throw me out when your done 

it doesn't have to be love if your getting me drunk 

it could be something i could cry after 

if your are my map i would rather get lost 

i would drink the poison to get away from you 

leave this wrenched place to stay away from you 

but its not enough 

i used to drink my memories away of you 

cut my self with a blade just to feel a different kind of pain

 stay alone with my self soaked in the rain  waiting for you 

to die was my only wish

 why would and how could you leave me alone like this  

to stay with you  was what was i wished 

my heart is broken how could you leave me alone like this

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

A broken heart is deeply felt by us all at some point in our lives. The best revenge is a new, truer love and living well. For our own empowerment, we must forgive and move on. And, remember, to forgive them doesn't mean letting them back into your life again; forgiving them is about taking BACK YOUR power from them.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Heart ranching poem you have here. There's always going to be that one person in our lives who hurts us so bad. That we can never really re-cover from. But just because your wounded doesn't mean you can't get back up again. You may meet one person who is bad to the core but it doesn't mean everyone you meet is bad and is willing to do horrible things to you. There are good people out there, who are willing to help,protect, love, and care about you. Just remember that. Love the poem.

Kaze~

[Ana B.]

This is a deep write. Lots of meaning and feeling.The title is very nice....pain and heartache are always hard to come by.....i hope all is well, or at least going that way. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very powerful in your expressing such painful emotions… I have been in heartaches a few times. They never get easier.

[destiny soto]

This is really emotional. I ansolutly love it I can feel feeling behind it. The words are so much more and there is so much meaning in this poem!❤👏

[anant mody]

ohhhhhhh my goodddd
soo deeepp feelingggssss
itssss really amzinggg im feeling.goosbummssss

[DarkestStoryline]

I really like this piece, I like how it expresses your feelings in a simple yet powerful way. Good job!