broken heart bleed red

this is a poem of how i felt in the past and sometimes now

lights are dimming 
the noises fading 
slowly thinking softly saying 
bottles empty body laying 
bloody wrist and torn up heart 
time is running out things are falling apart
i have little time until i fade and cant see lights and not i cant see anything but the cold darkness darker than night 
i can feel the tears rolling down so warm on my cheek 
i hope they find my letters 
they will know how they made me feel  
i hope they find me with pills still in my mouth  
all the empty bottles spread across my bed 
i hope they find the reason im dead 
my brown eyes they are frozen looking into nothing 
my lips no longer pink 
my skin is cold cold to the touch 
my heart no longer beating 
cheeks wet from crying 
..... heart broken from all the people lying i am happy now that i am dying 

Author's Note

let me know what you guys thing of my poem

Reviews

[diamonddave75]

A very dark write, but beautifully written.. Nice imagery.. Thanks for sharing.. Dave

[DarkestStoryline]

This is a nice poem, I love how your word choice and the rhyming patterns of it all. Nice job!