Hit Me With Your Best Shot!

Hit Me With Your Best Shot!

A Poem by Julie Grenness
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Inspired by a song.

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Hit  Me With Your Best Shot!


Would this be true love, so hot?

He put up his dukes, I said not, 

He hit me with his best shot!

I kicked him with my best shot!

Right in the groin, he was boy blue!

Would that be true love to you? '

No one walks a mile in my shoes,

I missed the woman's right to choose,

Then Ma got pugilistic dementia,

Is this what God meant for ya?

She punched us all in the b***s,

No one walks a mile in my shoes,

Was that true love, so hot,

He hit me with his best shot!

© 2015 Julie Grenness


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Julie Grenness
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lol i loved that song and i love your creative twist , i was trying to sing the song with your poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on July 1, 2015
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Julie Grenness
Julie Grenness

Bayswater, Melbourne., Victoria., Australia



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Greetings, my name is Julie. I live in Victoria, Australia. I am a 61 yo widow, a mostly retired teacher and tutor. Currently, I tutor two ESL students in English, as well as Maths and Science. Scribb.. more..

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