A Man Much Younger

The Younger Man entrigues me.....

"I want to see you again", he whispered sweet nothings in my Ear

 

I was shocked at his words, As he was younger by many Years

 

"Why?" I asked, with disbelief, shocked by both excitement and heart-pounding Fear

 

The Fear of my heart being torn Asunder

By a Man much Younger

 

Oh God!  I did not want to make a stupid remark, make a Blunder

Ah, this Man! ...who makes my Heart pound..

My mind and body take flight

As we turn the nights ...  into Lightening & Thunder

 

"I care for you like no other.  These other girls... Women I will not call them.  Drama queens by the tender age of Twenty.  But you, my Dear are the exception to all Others".

 

I shall take him at his word, this kind, sweet loving man of Thirty-two

He sets my Fever pitch to high

I know now, in my soul, he will never turn my World, my Heart ... the Darkest Blue

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Trisha]

Girlfriend, If they don't see how beautiful you are from the get go they never will. You can be so funny but so deep and very powerful. You have grown alot through your writing and through experience. I love ya and always will see ya as a best friend.

[Onyx_Rayne]

First off, you shouldn't have been shocked if he wanted to see you again... NOW, that being said. This write gave me flutterbies in my tummy. It's filled with the excitement and anticipation that go away so fast in a new relationship. Beautiful write sister - Love ya :)

[Mr. Deft Diction]

You have to love an older woman who can appreciate the younger guys, such as myself. This poem was nice b/c it left me wanting more. What happened next?

Nice work!

[badgirl beth]

You go girl~~~wow!!!..what a write...intense emotion and bravo on keeping my attention all the way to the end....Bravo!!!..emm 32!!!....yeah baby....

[Jinx]

Wow, I can totally relate to this. =) My husband is 8 years younger.

Beautifully written. You are quite talented.