Take Me

Take Me

A Poem by Diamondjules

His heat from his body, burns into my soul

His hot hands all over me

His sweat, his sultry scent

Haunts me

 

Touch me, I whisper

Feel me, I beg

 

Taste me, I demand

 

Love me, I whimper

Be deep inside of me, I command

Be mine, Forever

 

Take me to another place

Take me to another time

Take me, as I am

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Diamondjules


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powerful
sensual
beautiful
This piece screams to be heard
nice work
thank you for entering my contest

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sensual and powerful. Love it! Your last line really says it all. Awesome poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you s**t! I wonder which one night stand you are speaking about in this poem? lmao. Very sexy and so you. Love ya sister. Nice to see you writing again.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 9, 2008

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Diamondjules
Diamondjules

Raligh, NC



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I just fell into writing poetry when Poets.com was still alive and kicking. I wrote 498 poems/short stories, etc. It was a blast! Thanks to my friend, Lunadawn (on this site) - she told me to get m.. more..

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