scar

scar

A Poem by Julia

the thing that haunts you
in your dreams
reminding you of what needs to be forgotten

a flash of a memory
a blink of an eye
triggers harsh thoughts
of unwanted happiness

they came and left
but the internal scar remains
will never leave
will always be the same

© 2014 Julia


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My interpretation of this, I am reminded of someone who has panic attacks or flash backs. There are many people who believe that have are desensitized to those kinds of things because they can't see those scars. They feel like mental wounds are something the person just needs to "get over" This poem really puts it into perspective that not all scars are skin deep. Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Short and very deep. The words are clearly able to express the thoughts you wished to convey. Good Work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


My interpretation of this, I am reminded of someone who has panic attacks or flash backs. There are many people who believe that have are desensitized to those kinds of things because they can't see those scars. They feel like mental wounds are something the person just needs to "get over" This poem really puts it into perspective that not all scars are skin deep. Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This person cares!
Wear those scars proudly. I do.









Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 11, 2014
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