The storm within

My body shakes uncontrollably
Nothing can stop it
My breathing gets heavier
And slowly decays
My head starts pounding
Like thunder in my brain
Rain comes out of my eyes
Like a hurricane
My ears pick up every noise
And amplfy every sound
The storm is here
The storm is now

Reviews

[Woody]

a clever use of the elements of the storm to describe the upheaval taking place within.
I enjoyed the read.

[Luissanto]

I can totally relate to this body of work. For I have been through this storm myself.
but the best thing about a storm is that eventually it has to come to an end.
Thank You for writing such an insightful piece.

[Relic]

Ouch, doesn't sound like much fun. Kinda scary actually.