A very good poem. Great wisdom in the words.
"I had stopped guessing,
whether the day be sunny or raining,
because i know now,
it won't affect me. "
I agree. Life is doing and going forward. Better to test life than guess. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Very great start to your poem, I think you could definitely add more but I really loved the beginning!
Loved this stanza :Everyday i learn,
more of me,
like turning pages,
of an unknown story...beautiful!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
thanks friend, felt gud to read your comment. :)))
It was simple but i guess it's meaning was deep rather very very deep ..it had simplicity but at the same time it had a very confusing story of a soul which can be seen diffently by each reader..
well done on that ..
keep it up:)
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