losers with the guns

for the god of terror

They think they are,
the symbol of strength,
with their ambition,
costing more than lives,
of some hundreds and thousands.
At their gunpoint,
mightiest and wealthiest,
have to bow,
see, how much they RESPECT you,
despite all your flaws.
Every child that cried,
and every child that died,
every pair of eyes,
who had witnessed ,
your GLORY that time,
is screaming fearlessly,
"i have more strength,
because i can bear a NO,
rather being someone,
called loser with the guns."

Author's Note

a new poem..filled with anger to the pakistani terror news...where lots of children didnt came to their home today, and they never will..they will never be smiling, they be never be doing naughty deeds, because their innocence have no value in the hearts of merciless terrorists.

Reviews

[hardeep sabharwal]

This was one of the most shame fuel act and a blot on humanity, I feel the pains of your work and you have aptly give it this title

[ayesha gupta]

thanks, sir.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

nice work... this act was an inhuman act and deserved condemnation.....

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review.

[anant mody]

wowwwwww nice workk

felt thee poeem

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review. :)

[anant mody]

my pleasure miss:-):-):-):-)

[Mayank]

it was one brutal incident that made me cried after years....

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for reading..

[rashu]

very nicely penned down and its truth also ..
my heart just broke down when i heard the news.
dreadful ..just broken

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for connecting to the news. we should have faith..those monsters have to pay for it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Guns are just the tools. Hate killed. Whole world is sadden by this attack. We must stop hate and separation. We must learn. One planet and one people. The planet is getting smaller. We must get along. My prayers for the country and the families. They have a lifetime of sadness to learn.
Coyote

[ayesha gupta]

thanks coyote, for sharing your beautiful thought -one planet one people.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Native Americans had said for many years. One planet and one people. We must share her and get along.

[Happy hours]

very well written....i wish it should not happened ever ever again

[ayesha gupta]

ya.. hope so.

[stars are far]

that was very sad, yet described and written well..
keep that up

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review and connecting to the news.

[Kuldeep desai]

really heart breaking incident..........May their soul rest in peace...........atleast now some serious measures should be taken against the terrorist so called loosers with guns.........

[ayesha gupta]

thanks kuldeep. i m sure they will get a strict punishment..maybe capital punishment.

[Sindu]

A heart wrenching day where innocent lives paid the price for mindless revenge of losers.. If god really asked for blood shed, I say they have a wrong picture of god.. it's humans who destroy

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review. god never asks such. "for the god of terror" signifies the one who is heartless enough to kill children..you can say master of terrorist.