Me

in a new relation, its important to hold your true self, or else life would be messy and painful.

I love you, its true,
you make me happy,
you are so nice.
but i have realised
that fine line where
my love turns obsession,
when you are not there,
ofcourse there are such times,
I feel angry,
depressed and hurt.
this love had became a drug,
pills for happiness,
I observed.

I still love you,
but I am not going to lose ME,
there will be occassions,
when I would have to walk alone,
there will be times,
when you will be far.
I want to stand strong alone,
and not depend on you for every milestone.
I want to restore the love,
which is now a drug or obsession.
I want to be happy,
even if you are busy,
or not there for me.
I want to discover ME

Author's Note

a new poem..feeling like it.
hope you like it. read, rate, review, enjoy.

Reviews

[Saddam]

Love and Love, This is not the wholly and completely, there is something for you and also for another, it may understand. The theme of this poem is so vivid and might be find the solution. By the line it is very nice art of piece. Thanks for sharing it.

[ayesha gupta]

thankyou so much.

[Saddam]

You are welcome dear friend...

[Lyn Anderson]

There is always that line. We must always be someone without our significant other.

[ayesha gupta]

yep. true.
thanks for review.

[rashu]

that's amazing work girl..
your feeling has made your poem more beautiful,
and it's imp. that in a relationship there's always a need of me other than we:)
good take:)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks rashu. i m glad you liked it.

[The Black Warrior]

Wow, okay…here’s my take on this poem. This is what I am going through…I want to be held; yet again I want to walk through this alone. I feel like crying on his shoulders, yet I want him to remember me smiling. I don’t want him to feel pity for me, or see me so vulnerable and stressed. I don’t want to feel like I depend on him to be happy, or feel the need to have him near just for me to be able to breath…to smile. I don’t want his attention, I him to give a little space. Cuz, I don’t want to fall for him…he is not mine…he belongs to another. I need to find myself and fight back…against every desire and temptation. WOW did I just share all that? LOL
Thank you for sharing.

[ayesha gupta]

that was great. :-)

[hardeep sabharwal]

:) Two things came in my mind when I was reading this, first, my poem I, and secondly a dialog from my story " for me self respect is more important than love "
A nice read here Ayesha, good job

[ayesha gupta]

thanks sir. :-)

[stars are far]

Thats very true, we cant always be attached to someone, we have to find oursleves, and discover that we are an entity by ourselves...that was very great work :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot for your review. i am happy that you liked it.

[Surya pradha]

another great love poem. keep it up!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks buddy. :-)

[bunny]

Awesome girl , you express so genuine , I hope whenever I will fall in love I might feel same because I have never been in love.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks bunny. :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

A hard subject. When I got marry. My wife problems became my problems. Love make two people work together for the similar goals and dreams. Good to know yourself and be able to stand on your own feet. I told my daughters. Never depend on another to pay your bills. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. A poem that left the reader with something to ponder.
Coyote

[ayesha gupta]

thanks ..you taught them good lesson. it will surely help them.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Sanjh]

It expresses a state of mind which all lovers go through. Brilliantly penned the emotions here. And loosing yourself for someone else is only justified if the other person is also ready to do the same for you.
Great write, keep it up...:)

[ayesha gupta]

wow..thankyou so much sanjh.. i am glad you liked it.

[Sanjh]

You are welcome...:)