Me

in a new relation, its important to hold your true self, or else life would be messy and painful.

I love you, its true,
you make me happy,
you are so nice.
but i have realised
that fine line where
my love turns obsession,
when you are not there,
ofcourse there are such times,
I feel angry,
depressed and hurt.
this love had became a drug,
pills for happiness,
I observed.

I still love you,
but I am not going to lose ME,
there will be occassions,
when I would have to walk alone,
there will be times,
when you will be far.
I want to stand strong alone,
and not depend on you for every milestone.
I want to restore the love,
which is now a drug or obsession.
I want to be happy,
even if you are busy,
or not there for me.
I want to discover ME

Author's Note

a new poem..feeling like it.
hope you like it. read, rate, review, enjoy.

Reviews

[Emily]

I love how it starts off!
Well done!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks mam..

[Prabha Salimath]

A very important thing you explained here, human can't be alone, still time comes to be alone and I find ME when I'm alone and it become a habbit of me that I like it ME a lot now and surely pay an hour for me everyday that's my deal with me. I wish everyone to find ME in themselves bcoz time is in eternal race be happy. A beautiful poem I loved it.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review. :)

[Sindu]

Quite important to love ourselves before sharing it.. Nice write. Interesting to see the thin thread between the love and obsession

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review. i think love can create only a lovely feeling, if it brings feeling of depression, and hurt, its obsession.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

nicely done..........
i liked it!!!
:)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot. :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot. :)

[RAOrourke]

I still love you,
but I am not going to lose ME,
there will be occassions,
when I would have to walk alone,
there will be times,
when you will be far.
I want to stand strong alone,
and not depend on you for every milestone...wonderfully done! so true and so hard to do, to stay true to one's self! Great job

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review. :))

[Misha]

I like it, sweet sense of love and care..pure and straight from heart

[ayesha gupta]

i am happy you understoody my view. :)

[Misha]

Nice...really like it and nicely done

[Kuldeep desai]

well nicely written........usage of words at correct place and appropriately is very well done......

[ayesha gupta]

thanks kuldeep

[M.A.Rathore]

Losing self esteem is not a true love. A true love is where there is the absense of any obssession or lust oriantation though this is the personal asset of ones identity should be yeilded in total dedication after having been united in a single wedlock.
At present this is an urgent need to be safe in the growing world where our society has been passing into a controversial stage. Your poem lets us think about the moral highness in love and all other soft issues...
Thanks for sharing so nice poem . Ayesha

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review, sir.

[M.A.Rathore]

You're welcome Ayesha

[Avinash]

This is first step towards real wisdom. But the road will not be easy. You will falter many times but ultimately you will find it.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks avinash.. :-)