Memories

memories brings the lovely moments back.. dedicated to someone special <3

Memories of us,
two years back,
when we used to fight,
maybe that was your pass-time.

You irritated me like hell,
and supported me as well.
You were like a rock-music,
filled with energy and madness.

And after a while,
I was addicted to you.
I can't tell if it was love,
but it felt so good with you.

Then my instincts told me "no".
I dont know why i felt so.
Maybe, it was fear of your rejection.
So, i broke contact and let go.

It was painful for both of us.
So, you decided, and followed your gut.
You said the three magical words
and made me the happiest girl in the world.

Author's Note

so, this was my simple love story..i hope you liked it.
share your love story with me via reviews. waiting. :)

Reviews

[Govind singh]

Well...I too write romance but mine is just different...Ur is amazing..deep and great use of words..

[Sreenath]

simplicity at its best ,,,but it could have been more improved with many other words... to be honest it was fairly good.. enjoyed reading it keep smiling :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Great love poem. It is simple and has a good rhyming structure.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks bhumika. :)

[Mayank]

good love story... good rhyming structure...

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review.

[The Black Warrior]

Very lovely poem, it reminded of my father and step-mother LOL

They are my greatest example of true love ;)

Nicely done Ayesha, this is indeed beautiful!

[ayesha gupta]

thankyou so much. :)

[The Black Warrior]

You are very welcome! ;)

[Kuldeep desai]

its really nice.....loved it....

[ayesha gupta]

thanks kuldeep

[Avinash]

Its a beautiful rhyme without losing any beauty of your emotions. Loved it.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot avinash.

[RAOrourke]

Very lovely Ayesha! Beautiful poem showing a love story and the pain and joy it can bring!

[ayesha gupta]

thankyou so much.

[Prabha Salimath]

A very lovely poem on love I wish luck you guys, you guys are already in love don't make anyway to out, no matter what happens. just zip your heart and stay safe in each others heart forever and ever.
Good luck.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for blessings and review

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Sweet!!!!
Each love story is beautiful.......just as this one!!!
I wish you both all the luck and happiness in the world!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome................. :) :)