Changing weather

tried to connect nature with emotions. enjoy..

There was a time,
when it was cold,
and my feelings froze.

Snow all over the trees,
no birds, no flowers,
no sighting of a rainbow.

There was snowfall,
all over the hills,
I felt lonely and gazed the show.

When you came,
the sun rose beyond the horizon,
the sky turned amber hue.

Snow started melting,
and birds came out singing.
It is the beginning of spring, I knew.

You are the reason,
of my happiness.
You are the reason,
of this changing weather.
I love you so much. I really do.

Author's Note

another love poem. i hope you like it.
review , rate, enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Avinash]

Love is the only reason we are here on earth.

[ayesha gupta]

yes avinash. its true. :)

[Emily]

Love how it's worded!
Keep it up!

[ayesha gupta]

thankyou so much. i m glad that you liked it.

[Prabha Salimath]

Vivid description of winter cool....

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot. :)

[Surya pradha]

nice connecting weather to love. a vivid poem with good imagery. well written!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks, surya.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Great attempt at trying to connect love with nature...................Nature is lovely!!!

"There was a time,
when it was cold,
and my feelings froze.

Snow all over the trees,
no birds, no flowers,
no sighting of a rainbow. "

"When you came,
the sun rose beyond the horizon,
the sky turned amber hue.

Snow started melting,
and birds came out singing.
It is the beginning of spring, I knew.
"

you paint quite a painting here with your words.......
thank you for a delightful read!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!! :) :)

[M.A.Rathore]

This is really a powerful poem on divine love. All the six stanzas are superbly built made fantastically expressed except some changes or edit..as

You were the reason,
of my happiness.
And still you are
of this changing weather.
I love you so much. I really do

[ayesha gupta]

thank a lot for suggestion and review. :-)

[M.A.Rathore]

And make the last stanza in three lines also..

[1Disawsum]

just minor corrections... "no sighting of a/the rainbow" (2nd stana)
"the sun rose beyond the horizon" (4th stanza)
"and birds came out singing, it is..." (5th stanza)

Other than that, nice and simple poem! Great analogies xx

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot.

[Kuldeep desai]

I think, it will be better if you use i knew instead of i know at 5th stanza last line,............except that its good.I liked 3rd stanza very much...

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review and correction.. :)