Changing weather

tried to connect nature with emotions. enjoy..

There was a time,
when it was cold,
and my feelings froze.

Snow all over the trees,
no birds, no flowers,
no sighting of a rainbow.

There was snowfall,
all over the hills,
I felt lonely and gazed the show.

When you came,
the sun rose beyond the horizon,
the sky turned amber hue.

Snow started melting,
and birds came out singing.
It is the beginning of spring, I knew.

You are the reason,
of my happiness.
You are the reason,
of this changing weather.
I love you so much. I really do.

Author's Note

another love poem. i hope you like it.
review , rate, enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sweet and gentle words. I liked them.
"You are the reason,
of my happiness.
You are the reason,
of this changing weather.
I love you so much. I really do."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Saddam]

Snow started melting,
and birds came out singing.
It is the beginning of spring, I knew.

The weather is changing dear. Beautiful poem. It like someone's effect?

[Sanjh]

Yes, I enjoyed it alot. A sweet poem on moving from darkness to light with the help of love.
Thanks for sharing...:)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot for review, friend.

[Mayank]

"When you came,
the sun rose beyond the horizon,
the sky turned amber hue.

Snow started melting,
and birds came out singing.
It is the beginning of spring, I knew" - these lines are fantastic...

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review.

[RAOrourke]

the sun rose beyond the horizon,
the sky turned amber hue. Loved the description here!
Ayesha-Great job again, you really show your emotions through your writing! Great job!

[ayesha gupta]

thankyou so much. those lines consumed a lot of time to get exact words.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Lovely, and nice imagery, I enjoyed read, good job Ayesha

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot, sir.

[Sindu]

Beautiful imagery!
Really connests.. good work
nice, pleasant read Ayesha!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks sindu. :)

[Happy hours]

when we're in love...we can feel the weather..it gives us a smooth vibration but thats because of someone special in our life....i really liked your poem

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot. i am glad you liked it. :)

[Happy hours]

you're most welcome

[Jen]

Yeah, because of love, human beings feel emotions... without it, hatred and contempt will destroy the world..your emotions are well penned in this poem...
Thank You!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot.