Imperfection

nobody is perfect, everyone is different, and think different. so, we should not expect them to be perfect in their roles, and try to understand their views.

Perfection is
an ideal state.
God may have,
not the human race.

I am imperfect ,
and i am happy with that.
So, stop taunting,
or pointing on every mistake.

We all are different,
and do think different,
there's nothing wrong with that,
its a fact.

When you will try to see beauty,
you will discover,
this uniqueness is better,
than the 'perfect' state.

Author's Note

a new poem.. i hope you like it. :)
connect with me, and share what you think about the topic via reviews. :)

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

This poem is well thought out, carefully constructed, and a nice thought.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

what a coincident!! i wrote something similar yesterday. its called "Flaws" do check it out!!!
beautiful message!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review. i will read it for sure.

[Prabha Salimath]

I liked it dear and yes there is no perfect thing in this world but trying to be perfect we get organized for better.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot for review.

[M.A.Rathore]

First pf all as
"To err is human,to forgive is divine"( John Dryden)
Man is a bundle of errors and mistakes yet for improvement there is always scope for it. Yes. It's no one if perfect except God ( yet I don't know He does commit some errors or not) Our task should make ourselves nearest to perfection. Not being attentive we err. It should be paid attention. There is no doubt each and every man is different from his birth and inclinations. Though for the sake mearly perfection one should not be behaved rudely. If behave in an uncivilized then the person is not considerd perfect. In this sense your poem has a voice against the dire humiliation on the name of perfection.
Thanks Ayesha for giving me and opportunite to read your work.
A suggest.. remove "will" from first line of last stanza.
The structure is
If he comes.....he will welcome her...
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Thanks for sharing..

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review. :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always...:-) :-)

[Sanjh]

Wonderful, the lines became more and more powerful with the flow...specially

When you will try to see beauty,
you will discover,
this uniqueness is better,
than the 'perfect' state.

Loved these lines...:)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot.

[Sanjh]

You are welcome...:)