Imperfection

Imperfection

A Poem by ayesha gupta
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nobody is perfect, everyone is different, and think different. so, we should not expect them to be perfect in their roles, and try to understand their views.

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Perfection is
an ideal state.
God may have,
not the human race.

I am imperfect ,
and i am happy with that.
So, stop taunting,
or pointing on every mistake.

We all are different,
and do think different,
there's nothing wrong with that,
its a fact.

When you will try to see beauty,
you will discover,
this uniqueness is better,
than the 'perfect' state.

© 2014 ayesha gupta


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ayesha gupta
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We all are different,
and do think different,
there's nothing wrong with that,
its a fact.

It is true. If all thinks equal then who will think different. Beautiful piece friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thankyou for your kind review.
Saddam

9 Years Ago

You are most welcome dear friend.
nice words and very meaningful...

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

10 Years Ago

thanks a lot
"When you will try to see beauty,
you will discover,
this uniqueness is better,
than the 'perfect' state."
I agree. The imperfections make us different and special. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 10 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

10 Years Ago

thanks for such a nice review.
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
yeah, non of us is perfect, yet some people think they are.. that was very nicely done :) and were are unique by our imperfections

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

10 Years Ago

thanks a lot.
stars are far

10 Years Ago

always my pleasure
To err is human,
Every one of us is imperfect, in one way or the other, and as you said only god is perfect, (or sometimes even He may be not :D)
you have written this very well and described well
Thankyou for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

10 Years Ago

thanks for review.
Nice wording! Keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

10 Years Ago

thanks a lot. :)
Perfectly imperfect we all are my dear. Yes, great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

10 Years Ago

thanks for review.
though your poem is sweet and great...but i still choose to be perfect....the perfect one are unique ultimately...nice writing by the way :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

10 Years Ago

thanks for review. i dont think we can attain perfectness in everything, if you want a perfect caree.. read more
Happy hours

10 Years Ago

yeah you're right :)
Absolutely true! Rather be unique than perfect!
Nice write Ayesha! good emotion :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

10 Years Ago

thanks a lot sindu. :)
agree with your poem. no one is perfect and a human has to learn to overlook any flaw that he or she has. really liked this poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

10 Years Ago

thanks a lot surya. i really like the way you appreciate my works..i think you have reviewed all my .. read more
Surya pradha

10 Years Ago

yes, i try to read all my friends' work!

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