Desire

my thoughts on "desire"..

Desire...
it's not just a small word,
it's the energy to achieve my dream.
Desire...
it's not about dreaming endlessly,
it's about converting my vision to reality.
Desire...
it's not about sitting hopelessly,
it's my dedication, i will improve.
Desire...
it's not what i 'want',
it's what i 'need'.
Desire...
it's not about anyone,
it's about what i feel.
I dare to desire,
i believe in me.
Even if i fail,
atleast, i would be happy,
that i 'desired',
rather than thinking,
'It can't be me'

Author's Note

its more than a poem to me.. my inner-voice with which i talk..that motives me , and guides when i feel low...my desire.
i hope you like it!
waiting for rewiews. :)

Reviews

[Sindu]

Simple write on the desire to grow and be better! who wouldn't connect with it! good one :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks. i m glad you liked it.

[Sindu]

You're welcome :) hey add in apostrophe for its.. Just a suggestion

[Sreenath]

great i couldn't find any mistakes ... simple and awesome great ... enjoyed reading it ... a true inspiring lines ...peace keep smiling :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot for review

[Lyn Anderson]

It is a good piece, with lovely thoughts.
A minor point. If you are going to repeat It's throughout then it may look better with the apostrophe for It's, meaning it is. However, I would suggest taking some of them out as all that repetition can be hard to read. Just an opinion.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for suggestion

[Avinash]

It is most beautiful poem which I have read from you. Writing is all about independence of soul and you have done pretty good job over here. Yes desire is the engine which gets you going in every phase of life.
We should always have dreams and desires. Kudos to you.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Its a nice read ayesha, I want to add desire is life and life is desire, good job, keep writing

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot. :)

[Nikki]

Powerful, motivating.. Powerfully motivating. :) Excellent job. :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautifully done!
desire and hope are the weapons for success.
lovely poem!
i loved it!!!
:)

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for review. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome...... :) :)